tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post115650836984739489..comments2010-02-08T15:06:21.944+05:30TShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12218319233910661426noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-59595349116541945082010-02-08T15:06:21.944+05:302010-02-08T15:06:21.944+05:30Great ending!Rajitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17386945213269863756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1161606227559691852006-10-23T17:53:00.000+05:302006-10-23T17:53:00.000+05:30@vixenville: Awww, how sweet!<BR/><BR/>@Aparajita: Thanks!!! Viren and I at the other building till mid November so I guess no more VLCC lunch!TShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12218319233910661426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1161528037448232972006-10-22T20:10:00.000+05:302006-10-22T20:10:00.000+05:30This is real good stuff. I could relate "Varun" to someone that I know very well.I liked the story, it is in someway related to my realtionship, however the end would be different.<BR/>Keep it going..........Aprajitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02022646225577753431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1161526640450040842006-10-22T19:47:00.000+05:302006-10-22T19:47:00.000+05:30this is pretty killer!!!!<BR/>i loved it!<BR/>awsome writing.I am floored..great blog!vixenvillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02111229033043214569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1160742477930974572006-10-13T17:57:00.000+05:302006-10-13T17:57:00.000+05:30Melodramatic however interesting.Pratimnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1159944485467893902006-10-04T12:18:00.000+05:302006-10-04T12:18:00.000+05:30HI TANMAY,<BR/><BR/>AWESOME WORK DUDE...... U SOUNDED SO INSPIRATIONAL MAN...... ALL THE BEST DUDE...... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND DONT RUIN UR ART FOR ANY KINDA DISTRACTIONS...........STARhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13358850902061961098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1159942354689660202006-10-04T11:42:00.000+05:302006-10-04T11:42:00.000+05:30Good Work Tanmay,<BR/><BR/>Its excellent piece of writing. A pure suggestion if you can convert the same to screenplay or write a play and send for the commercials. Definately Ekta will take it up only you needto chnage the tile to something with "K".<BR/><BR/>Good job... keep it up.<BR/><BR/>Ketan ShahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1159611344060135952006-09-30T15:45:00.000+05:302006-09-30T15:45:00.000+05:30dude...i like what u wrote and ur style...keep it up...nemesishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03384254077933415873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1158751950649537202006-09-20T17:02:00.000+05:302006-09-20T17:02:00.000+05:30Thanks a million!<BR/><BR/>Just a question, I clicked the link on your comment, but it says page not available.<BR/>Why so?TShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12218319233910661426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1158729485174264332006-09-20T10:48:00.000+05:302006-09-20T10:48:00.000+05:30Amazing!!! I have read a few posts of yours... and I am going to put up a link to your blog on mine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1158528025404283682006-09-18T02:50:00.000+05:302006-09-18T02:50:00.000+05:30Brilliantly written......u had me glued to my chair till the end..simply loved it..Is is based on anything that actually happenend?...I think NOT...The story is too melodramatic to be true. "Boyz will be Boyz"....I dont think they can see their girlfriends ditch them like that...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1158505242377960312006-09-17T20:30:00.000+05:302006-09-17T20:30:00.000+05:30Amazing.. truly fantastic!!<BR/>Will be back soon plz write more stuff like dis!!Payalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1157393979477812182006-09-04T23:49:00.000+05:302006-09-04T23:49:00.000+05:30Happy Teacher's Day Tanmay!<BR/><BR/> By Your Favourite Student. <BR/><BR/>I know it 5-10 Mins early but I might not get a chance for next two days.<BR/><BR/>I hope I am not ajnabeee anymore :D.Ek ajnabeeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03399059874161609740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1157191387364308272006-09-02T15:33:00.000+05:302006-09-02T15:33:00.000+05:30Hi Tanmay,<BR/>I came across ur blogthru ur profile on orkut.<BR/>good writing....i thought i must convey.<BR/>TanviAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1157040585435652282006-08-31T21:39:00.000+05:302006-08-31T21:39:00.000+05:30Tanmay..brilliant stuff!! Not just this piece but all your other entries as well..agree with mannat on the way 'awfully' is spelt. Viren stop critiquing Ekta Kapoor and her creativity..people thrive on her soaps man...in Jaipur certainly they do..hehe. Solve some crosswords instead!Sugandhanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1157017715593681992006-08-31T15:18:00.000+05:302006-08-31T15:18:00.000+05:30No, I am not Dauni however you know me. <BR/><BR/>And as shakespeer said What's there in name so my name is not important however you feedback is. It is first time I am trying my hands on a story.<BR/><BR/>And i will leave enough hints for you to guess who I am.<BR/><BR/>And Tanmay, you asked me to keep in mind the basic character of the individuals while writing my story. I wish I was talented enough to do that. <BR/><BR/>I am sure you know whenever any famous novel/story is produced as a motion picture, people complain it was not as good as the book. The reason is people like to visualise the book the way they want. And not many people have the ability to view it exactly the way auther views that. And I am from the same group. But I will try not to take it too far away from your characters.<BR/>And it is still YOUR story.Ek ajnabeeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03399059874161609740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156978223117203022006-08-31T04:20:00.000+05:302006-08-31T04:20:00.000+05:30And yes, I thought you might be interested in this link.<BR/><BR/>http://readverycarefully.blogspot.com/Ek ajnabeeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03399059874161609740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156966604801771422006-08-31T01:06:00.000+05:302006-08-31T01:06:00.000+05:30Loved your blog Tanmay! Can you solve one puzzle for me? Were you acting as Rahul or yourself?<BR/><BR/>Instead, she says "It was awefully brave of you... very few people can do what you did at the party tonight. I wish I could've done the same..."Ek ajnabeeenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156880685474836882006-08-30T01:14:00.000+05:302006-08-30T01:14:00.000+05:30Tanmay.. this is brilliant stuff. very well written and you've written the dialogues very well too. that is something not many people can do. i loved the story, and could actually relate some people i know to it. check the spellings of 'awfully', don't think there is an e after w, just verify. but very very good, u had me hooked till the end.mannatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156853314097795852006-08-29T17:38:00.000+05:302006-08-29T17:38:00.000+05:30There is a feel good factor in the story which is very apparent yet it is in a very beautiful manner silhouetted against the tragic heroism of the lead....Bohot better bui 2 the u..Vasudevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16252336781751506894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156844527978649562006-08-29T15:12:00.000+05:302006-08-29T15:12:00.000+05:30Well written. Liked the suspense. I agree with Archie(NOT). We could sell this piece to Balaji Telefilms. I'm sure Ekta Kapoor with the right amount of melodrama would be able transform it into one of those saas-bahu type episodes devoid of any substance and also make it last for about 10 decades and how Varun and Radha's love child falls in love with Rahul and Ridhima's alcoholic offspring. Some things are better left here in the sanctity of the WWW so as not be desecrated media and the likeVirennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156671860550542812006-08-27T15:14:00.000+05:302006-08-27T15:14:00.000+05:30Brilliant!! We should put this up.. like publish it... or make it into a production or somethin!! <BR/>Fabulous work hun!<BR/>Mwah!Archienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156611800823821062006-08-26T22:33:00.000+05:302006-08-26T22:33:00.000+05:30luuuuuuuuuved it!!<BR/>luv it when it all comes together at the end!!!!<BR/>it was an AHA! moment fur me!!hehe<BR/>TanushreeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29434354.post-1156599903801180562006-08-26T19:15:00.000+05:302006-08-26T19:15:00.000+05:30Unnervingly, hauntingly lovely. And I love the fact that everything is spelt and punctuated correctly. This goes for your previous posts as well.mayanoreply@blogger.com